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Most outreach advice is someone guessing. This is the scoreboard.

Ranked by the only measure that matters — the share of readers who said they would reply. Nothing here is an opinion about what works.

Top ten

  1. 1

    Final follow-up after four ignored emails

    Hi [first name], I've sent four emails and haven't heard back, so I'm assuming this isn't a…

    Sales Follow-Up · 57% would reply7 verdicts

  2. 2

    Pitching a realtor to sell appointment setting services

    [Name], My concern to write this email? Two quick things. 1. Your average sale price over the last…

    Agency & Freelance Pitch · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  3. 3

    Recruiter InMail for a senior backend role

    Hi [first name], I hope this message finds you well! I came across your profile and was really…

    Recruiter Outreach · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  4. 4

    LinkedIn DM to a founder who posted about a problem I'd solved

    Saw your post about the onboarding rewrite taking four months. We hit the same wall last year. What…

    LinkedIn DM · 40% would reply5 verdicts

  5. 5

    Cold email to SaaS founders leading with a bug I found in their product

    Hi [first name], Signed up for [Company] yesterday to look at something else and got stuck. Step…

    Cold Email · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  6. 6

    Agency cold email that leads with a working prototype instead of a deck

    Hi [first name], Rather than send a proposal, I built the thing. Here's a working version of your…

    Agency & Freelance Pitch · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  7. 7

    Cold application email for a product design role with no opening posted

    Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my strong interest in any product design opportunities…

    Job Application · 25% would reply4 verdicts

Best in each category

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  1. Cold email to SaaS founders leading with a bug I found in their product

    Hi [first name], Signed up for [Company] yesterday to look at something else and got stuck. Step…

    Cold Email · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  2. LinkedIn DM to a founder who posted about a problem I'd solved

    Saw your post about the onboarding rewrite taking four months. We hit the same wall last year. What…

    LinkedIn DM · 40% would reply5 verdicts

  3. Final follow-up after four ignored emails

    Hi [first name], I've sent four emails and haven't heard back, so I'm assuming this isn't a…

    Sales Follow-Up · 57% would reply7 verdicts

  4. Recruiter InMail for a senior backend role

    Hi [first name], I hope this message finds you well! I came across your profile and was really…

    Recruiter Outreach · 33% would reply3 verdicts

  5. Cold application email for a product design role with no opening posted

    Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my strong interest in any product design opportunities…

    Job Application · 25% would reply4 verdicts

  6. Pitching a realtor to sell appointment setting services

    [Name], My concern to write this email? Two quick things. 1. Your average sale price over the last…

    Agency & Freelance Pitch · 33% would reply3 verdicts