Would you have replied to this?
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Final follow-up after four ignored emails
closing your file
Hi [first name], I've sent four emails and haven't heard back, so I'm assuming this isn't a priority right now. That's completely fine. I'm closing the file so I stop cluttering your inbox. If it comes back around this year, reply to this and I'll pick it up where we left off. Good luck with the launch. [your name]
Sales Follow-Up · Logistics
57%would reply · 7 verdictsPitching a realtor to sell appointment setting services
[Name], My concern to write this email? Two quick things. 1. Your average sale price over the last 12 months sits at $[Y]k, while the median home price in Orlando is $[X]k. That gap means you're already pulling buyers above the area's median, real room to lean into higher-tier listings on purpose instead of by accident. 2. But you closed [X] deals in the last 12 months where an average realtor in Orlando could close above 10/yr, so you deserve more and higher-tier clients this year, I'd love to help make that number 12-13 by EOY. If you're wondering what I do, here's a little bit about me: [portfolio site] Can I show you how I'd get you 10+ buyer/CMA meetings in the next 30 days using a proprietary booking system, on a pay-per-show-up basis, no upfront fee? A yes or no is fine. Best, [Name]
Agency & Freelance Pitch · linkedin.com ↗
33%would reply · 3 verdictsRecruiter InMail for a senior backend role
Hi [first name], I hope this message finds you well! I came across your profile and was really impressed by your background. I'm currently working with a fast-growing, well-funded company that is disrupting their space, and I think you could be a great fit for an exciting opportunity on their team. We are looking for a Senior Backend Engineer to join a dynamic team and help take the product to the next level. The company offers competitive compensation, great benefits, and a collaborative culture. Would you be open to a quick 15-minute chat this week to learn more? Looking forward to hearing from you!
Recruiter Outreach · Software
33%would reply · 3 verdictsLinkedIn DM to a founder who posted about a problem I'd solved
Saw your post about the onboarding rewrite taking four months. We hit the same wall last year. What actually fixed it was cutting the config screen entirely and defaulting everything, then letting people change it later. Shipped in three weeks instead. Happy to send the before/after if it's useful. Not selling anything.
LinkedIn DM · Fintech
40%would reply · 5 verdictsCold email to SaaS founders leading with a bug I found in their product
your signup flow drops people at step 3
Hi [first name], Signed up for [Company] yesterday to look at something else and got stuck. Step three asks for a billing address before showing what the product does. I closed the tab, then came back because I actually wanted to see it. Most people won't come back. I've moved that screen for two other B2B tools. Both saw signup completion improve inside a month. Want me to send a 3-minute screen recording of what I'd change? No call needed. [your name]
Cold Email · B2B SaaS
33%would reply · 3 verdictsAgency cold email that leads with a working prototype instead of a deck
built you a working version of the booking flow
Hi [first name], Rather than send a proposal, I built the thing. Here's a working version of your booking flow, running in your browser. Real screens, real flow, not a mockup. Took an afternoon. [link] You can click through it and see whether the structure makes sense before we talk about money at all. If it's wrong, you've lost nothing and I've lost an afternoon. If it's close, tell me what to change. [your name]
Agency & Freelance Pitch · Hospitality
33%would reply · 3 verdictsCold application email for a product design role with no opening posted
Application - Product Designer
Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing to express my strong interest in any product design opportunities that may be available at your organisation. I have been following your company for some time and am consistently impressed by the work you do and the values you represent. I am a product designer with six years of experience across fintech, e-commerce and healthcare. Throughout my career I have developed a strong skill set in user research, interaction design, prototyping and design systems. I am a collaborative team player who thrives in fast-paced environments and I am passionate about creating user-centred experiences that drive business outcomes. In my current role I have led the redesign of several key product surfaces, working cross-functionally with engineering and product stakeholders to deliver measurable improvements. I believe my experience would make me a valuable addition to your team. I have attached my CV and portfolio for your review. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my background aligns with your needs. Thank you for your time and consideration. Kind regards, [your name]
Job Application · E-commerce
25%would reply · 4 verdicts